tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2892373168002428669.post4231356972601952126..comments2010-05-03T09:05:27.921-07:00Comments on Cynthia's English 114 Blog: Draft..sortaCynthia G.http://www.blogger.com/profile/10980688676911834550noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2892373168002428669.post-7942273565740543362010-03-06T13:30:33.230-08:002010-03-06T13:30:33.230-08:00okay thanks =)okay thanks =)Cynthia G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10980688676911834550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2892373168002428669.post-89954390073190194612010-03-06T10:55:41.134-08:002010-03-06T10:55:41.134-08:00Just a thought -- the anecdote about your friend e...Just a thought -- the anecdote about your friend editing your high school's Wikipedia page might make for a good introduction to the essay. Your experiences in biology class would be good evidence in a body paragraph, but more details would be helpful; specifically, you could provide some examples of what your instructor did and did not want you to use as sources, to illustrate the difference between primary and secondary sources.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09371517434334505952noreply@blogger.com